Too many words

Here’re two examples of signage that used too many words strung together in unnecessarily convuluted writing.

This is one in a shopping centre:
simplify-signage---no-alcohol-before

Suggested improvement:
simplify-signage---no-alcohol-after

This is one on a bus:
simplify-signage---bus-before

Suggested improvement:
simplify-signage---bus-after

Don’t make it hard for the punters! There are more than enough distractions and noise around us these days!

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